One Single Impression: Underground
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Gandhi
Posted by Maggie
on Monday, March 15, 2010
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He traveled dusty roads
Armed with honesty
Seeking freedom for all
His deeds will live in history
As a man with an aura
Reaching out to large and small
Multitudes hearing his voice
Quickly answered his call
Sick of years of oppression
Where none had a say
Except to exist under rulers
Obeying things their way
The people became inspired
They surrounded this man
Enlightening their life
With a peaceful freedom plan
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wonderful, life is in our hands.
perfect poem about Gandhi
loved that you chose to write about Gandhi, he definitely had a aura! Nicely framed, he'll always be remembered!
Some names will live for ever.
His Aura lives on. Great tribute.
One of my heroes. Sadly his wider influence was not as strong as it could have been. This is, of course, mankind's fault, not his.
Perfect..
as a dirge it sucks!
perfection possible and achieved.! :)
he was a man with a most powerful aura indeed. well said! :)
I loved this...Gandhi most definitely had an aura that shined bright.
Gandhi ji didn't just have an aura, he pretty much was an aura. A worthy subject for any poem. Nicely done.
I second the others' comments. Ghandi's aura and legacy should not be forgotten, and it's great that you have chosen him for this prompt.
Ah, the power of a peaceful soul! Beautiful poem.
A great piece about a great man.
Carina said it perfectly. A wonderful tribute.
Beautiful tribute a beautiful person! Thanks!
Gandhi was an amazing human being. His philosophy of non-violence was an inspiration. Lovely verse.
Best wishes.
Ghandi's aura was remarkable. The final sentence is a perfect closer. Enjoyed this poem!
What a wonderful use of this prompt! These are the auras that make a difference.
it's inspiring!
may his tribe increase!
glad to stop by and read this beautiful piece on Gandhi-ji.It was indeed a peaceful freedom plan's call from this good soul.