Prompts for March 2012
2 hours ago
Empty
Posted by Maggie
on Monday, August 30, 2010
| Leave a Reply
Eventually vacant
Missing emotions
Personalities subdued
Through neglect
Yearnings disappear
-------For One Single Expression
Posts
missing emotions...that is empty!
Neglect.. oh, really painful.. but why bother.. and why miss emotions.. they are ours.. and we are what we are..that's it.
Like the poem anyway..as I said elsewhere.. feels good because its sad.
Nice Acrostic...
Brought out the Empty...
Neglecting leaves you vacant and empty. All desires die. Nice Acrostic bringing out the meaning.
Somehow that doesn't seem like a bad thing to me, but... ;) Enjoyed thinking about this one, for sure!
you made me lean in and wonder where these thoughts rose from.
Thanks for Nina S. I had to get up and do a sultry dance~
Longing, and feeling so empty. Such deep emotion in a short piece. Perfect!
• Empty
Your last two lines said it all...sad but well expressed.
www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
www.veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.com
So they do. Strong poem. And thank God for the strength.
Deep emotion...