Prompts for March 2012
4 hours ago
sharing much
never enough
fear rules moves
when going gets tough
running and running
no peace inside
searching for home
where love can reside
unable to pay
for every mistake
recognizing many rules
are for some to break
jotting in notebooks
filling so many pages
expressions of poetry
throughout
the ages
hoping someday
perhaps it may be
entertainment to others
with ability to see
-------For One Single Expression
interesting thoughts...!
Your last line brings home the feelings in this poem. Oh, to be understood here and now and not as the amusement of a later generation!
I hope all the doodling in the notebooks make sense in the future.
Happy day ~
I agree, we all wait for others to read our thoughts. Lovely poem.
Melanie
Great poem - "fear rules moves" - something I am always having to overcome in my writing!
Hi Maggie ~~ I like this, nice thoughts. Mrs. Jim says that I should print my poems for a little book to be handed down.
I have a retired preacher friend who gave me a copy of his poem book.
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best regards, you rock.
lovely take.
welcome share your poetry talent with us this week.
we are open until Thursday, 8pm.
amazing sentiments.
wow.