winter whispers
Posted by Maggie
on Saturday, October 8, 2011
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in front of the dam
a river does flow
raging over stones
people often throw
into the cold water
where they do sink
faster than a mind
has time to think
about a river
where it may go
in front of a dam
where it does flow
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This flows as nicely as the river.
nice images..!
I liked the circular aspect to the poem.
Oh, I know how it feels!
It flows well...
much
lovely flow.
:)
Lovely images and word flow.
Melanie
Beautiful flow! Smooth as silk.
Magnificent flow. Each verse flows like the river. I also enjoyed the playlist on your site!
wonderful flow of words Maggie, just like a river does...:)
I liked it.. the way it flows..well done.. and thanks!!
a beauty awash in wonder.... thank you...
There is beauty in the flow of your words...good job